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Tethered

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Another from my challenge, now that I have more time in the day I feel like my images are improving xD

Comments or thoughts?
Image size
1762x1024px 663.67 KB
Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D40
Shutter Speed
1/125 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
31 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 16, 2010, 10:24:11 PM
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I like this one. It has a very eerie feel to it. The colours especially. The black of the shadows is very formidable, and the slightly yellow and a green tint to the window looks sickly.
Although, if I'm honest, I'd have to say that the colours are a little bland. There isn't much life in them, and slightly more yellow, even if it's just hints of it, would bring the picture a little more... impact.
A good use of steam on the window (assuming it's steam), because it adds to the illusion of not being able to see beyond the window. Like something bad and forbidden is happening. And the use of the water dripping down (whether it was intentional or not) feels very sinister as it makes it look like blood. The rope, too, adds to the pretence that the figure is a prisoner and can't escape.
The shadows are good because they make the character seem not quite human.
If i could say one thing, it is that the smudge of dark on the right side looks to much like a face. I don't know if it is one, but perhaps removal of it would make the photograph look a little more... professional.
And, perhaps, some distorted shapes in the background would make the picture much darker.
Overall, pretty good, although one or two things to improve on.